I loved the topic of your paper. Your abstract and introduction looked really good. You did a good job of tying in researchers info to yours. I think some of the citations are incorrect, but I'm not 100% maybe check with hem. I think the procedure section could be revised a little/shortened.
I loved the topic of your paper. Your abstract and introduction looked really good. You did a good job of tying in researchers info to yours. I think some of the citations are incorrect, but I'm not 100% maybe check with hem. I think the procedure section could be revised a little/shortened.
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